How to Write Cold Emails That Always Get Read

In this video we’re going to talk about how you can find the right people to contact, how to cold email, and the number one sales tip from Alex Berman.

My name is Eric Siu I’m the cohost of the Marketing School podcast and the host of the Growth Everywhere podcast where we nerd out on marketing and entrepreneurship.

So Alex Berman, the guy that you’re going to see, is a very smart guy, has a great YouTube channel on sales training, and you’re gonna learn from him. And you’re gonna get better, so enjoy!

The first thing I like to do is think about cold emails as the recipient. All of us have received cold emails in the past, and it’s pretty obvious when you receive a bad cold email. Why it’s bad — a couple things hit you right away one.

When you look into your Gmail inbox, you’ll see the subject line and you’ll see a little bit of the first line of the email, and those two things will make you decide whether to delete that email or open it. So the first thing to do is to make sure the subject line is at least neutral. That’s why I like generic subject lines. I’m a big fan of ‘Hi from Alex.’ I’m a big fan of ‘Quick question.’ The one that performs the best for us at Experiment 27 is ‘Question about…

And then their company name’ so ‘Question about Tide’ or ‘Question about General Electric.’ The reason why those generic subject lines work is because they don’t turn somebody off. If you pitched your product in that subject line, there’s a much higher chance you’re gonna get deleted, which means they’re not even gonna read the body of the email.

The second thing is that the first line of the email needs to be very specific towards their business. I like to use a compliment so I might say something like ‘Hey Mark, Came across Congrats on working with Power Rangers!’ Or if you’re targeting local restaurants ‘Hey, just looked at your website and love the food photography.’ Something specific.

Then what that’ll do is get them to open the email, which means you’ve already beat out most of the bad cold emails because you’re not in spam, and you’re actually getting open. But we’re talking about responses here and the main way that I’ve found to get somebody to respond to an email is to tell them something they already think is true, and speak it as an expert. And then tell them the solution.

So for instance, ‘Hey you know do that normal compliment, found your website really like the work you’re doing with Power Rangers. My name is Alex and I do marketing for or digital agencies…’

Or if I’m talking to a digital agency, and I say I do marketing for a digital agency that’s instantly gonna make them spark up. If you’re targeting SaaS companies you could say ‘Hey, I do marketing for SaaS companies…’ or you could say something like ‘Hey I just got off the phone with the CMO of a major telecom company, and they had these two main issues. Here are the solutions.

I’m wondering if you’re dealing with anything similar, and then two specific ideas. I like to use the exact same ideas per industry, so for instance when I’m reaching out to CEOs of an agency with between 1 million and 20 million in revenue they’re most likely gonna be dealing with the same issues, where if I was reaching out to the CMO of that same type of company they might have different issues.

And those two issues only come from talking to your customers. A good example of this is I just got off a coaching call with somebody who sells Facebook ads in the ecommerce space and in his idea email the main things he was pointing out was that Facebook ads with videos sell worse sometimes than Facebook ads with still images, so he recommended testing both. And that is a very niche, very specific idea.

Coming up with those is how you get responses, then finally ending each email with a call-to-action: ‘Let me know if you find this interesting. We’d love to hop on a call with you and discuss further. Would you mind if I sent over a few times?’ The call-to-action doesn’t really matter as long as it is a question they can understand, that ends with an actual question mark. You’d be surprised how many emails go out that ends in period.

It goes back to putting yourself in the shoes of your customer and who would you rather buy from, so for instance if you’re the CEO of a major company let’s say you’re T-Mobile, huge enterprise company, would you buy Facebook ads from somebody, or would you delegate that decision to a CMO? Would that CMO delegate that decision to another like Director of Marketing.

Maybe Director of Marketing – Paid Acquisition. Something like that… so thinking about that decision-making tree at the target company is the main way that I find titles to go after and then from there it’s using LinkedIn to identify the target customer.

Typing in Director of Marketing, T-Mobile, for instance, will bring up a list of people, and then it’s going back to those assumptions to find which of these targets is the one that’s gonna buy from you.

So for instance there’s a Director of Media and Marketing at T-Mobile is probably a better fit than Director of Field Sales at T-Mobile, but if you’re selling a product that benefits the field sales team that would be better. So for each specific company, especially if you’re targeting someone like the Fortune 500, it’s worth doing this deep dive specifically; otherwise if you don’t want to do all of this research the quickest way is to start with the CEO.

Email them; if they don’t get back within two weeks then go down one level. Email the Director of Marketing. If they don’t get back within two weeks then go to the next level. I do not recommend sending multiple emails to the same company at the same time because that is a quick way to get written off by that entire company. My number one sales tip is to approach every client call not like you are a sales guy trying to pitch a product, but instead like you’re a doctor trying to diagnose a disease. What does that mean? So for instance when I am on a sales call and we sell marketing services for agencies at Experiment 27, I’m talking to an agency owner.

I know because of our research and because of our cold emailing process that they’re between one and twenty million dollars in revenue, and based on our past conversations not with them but with other agency owners in the same spot, I have a very good idea of how they think and problems that they might be dealing with.

But I’m not going to come right out and say it. instead I’m going to give a two-sentence on what Experiment 27 does, and then ask them about their marketing. Have you hired a marketing vendor in the past who runs marketing for you right now?

Do you have key performance indicators? Set up questions that don’t lead them towards a specific answer, but give me a better idea of what they need to know. Your sales managers might have given you scripts or key points to hit, but the easiest way that I found to sell anything is to listen to a question.

Think of a case study that you might have in your head that relates to it, and then answer the question based on your past experience. So if they say as an example, ‘Oh we’ve run all of our marketing internally this entire time, and it’s just me who runs the marketing, I could say something like ‘That happens in a lot of agencies. The one founder tries to take on marketing and also sales and also do production and it slows everything down.

I know a ton of marketing agencies and based on their client results you’d think they were crushing it, but then you look at their own website, and their inbound leads are way lower than where they should be and that’s the exact type of thing that we help with.’ What I did there is I heard his answer, I internalized what he said, I listened to him, and then I took it back to the Experiment 27 pitch and brought up one of our case studies.

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